sometimes the night betrays you...and the only option left is to give in
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Original: 9/10/2012 8:25 PM
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Monday, September 10, 2012

this one is about you

 The hunger in my limbs will not leave me
My heart dies for you while waiting at dirty bus stops
silence the only echo in my ears
if you were a song
I'd swallow you
feel the beat of your words in my ribs
I dream of you pleasing me against trees
taking trains and planes until there is no place we cannot call home
I want you in the deep
In the sorrowful places
I haven't let breathe
I need you in the hollow spots
In the parts I'm afraid to touch
when I'm alone

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You write so well. I hope you find all that you seek for, or that the pain of not having it lessens.
Posted 9/10/2012 8:50 PM by GreekPhysique Xanga Premium Member - recommend - reply

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awesome
Posted 9/10/2012 9:32 PM by UnwarySoul - recommend - reply

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@GreekPhysique - thank you
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@UnwarySoul - thanks
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Beautifully written.....
Posted 9/10/2012 11:10 PM by MissNzisa - recommend - reply

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just wow!!! very neat!!!
Posted 9/10/2012 11:31 PM by sha_ciel2012 - recommend - reply

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this is simply fantastic
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wow.

"if you were a song
I'd swallow you
feel the beat of your words in my ribs"

absolute powerful, tangible imagery in those lines. In. Love.
Posted 9/19/2012 5:19 AM by a_girl_unraveled Xanga Lifetime Member - recommend - reply


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